My Songs

This is my first song in my life. I know that this is very weak. I wrote it yesterday, probably it was 10 minutes

FOR YOU

1. My boy
Sadness boy
Smile to me, please
You aren't alone
You are with me
Open your eyes, please
You goes to darkness
It kill you all time

Referain:

I want to help you
I want to be with you
I live for you
You are my love

2. Little girl
Where are you?
Where is your mind?
You cry all time
You hurt yourself
Why?
Tell me why, please

Referain:

I want to help you
I want to be with you
I live for you
You are my love

(Children's choir):
3. We are the only children
We grown in pain
We are looking for love
Love in our hearts


Referain:


Referain:

I want to help you
I want to be with you
I live for you
You are my love


Referain:

I want to help you
I want to be with you
I live for you
You are my love

Natt, this isnt weak. this is great!!
im surprised this is your very first song. its awesome[:

Wow, that's beautiful!
Is it really your first song? It's strong x

pixiedust19 and MoonChildEve Thank you very much <3

MoonChildEve, yes my first song, I wrote it only in 10 minutes, when I was very depressed.

this needs a tune so if someone could help me I would really apreciate it! thanks!

Secret Wonderland
by...me!

While the world is burning
When the earth starts to quake
And love turns to hate

I'll ride my dragonfly into the sky
I'll feel so alive as I fly
Into my secret place, my mystical world
All my troubles disappear
In my secret wonderland.

They say I'm strange
They want me to change
I won't deny it, or try to hide it
But they just don't get me.

So I'll ride my dragonfly into the sky
I'll feel so alive as I fly
Into my secret place, my mystical world
All my troubles disappear
In my secret wonderland

This is a place where roses are blue
and all the leaves are crystal clear
The sky is not black nor blue
but somewhere inbetween,
Reflections in trees,
My secret hiding place.

Ashleigh wrote:this needs a tune so if someone could help me I would really apreciate it! thanks!

Secret Wonderland
by...me!

While the world is burning
When the earth starts to quake
And love turns to hate

I'll ride my dragonfly into the sky
I'll feel so alive as I fly
Into my secret place, my mystical world
All my troubles disappear
In my secret wonderland.

They say I'm strange
They want me to change
I won't deny it, or try to hide it
But they just don't get me.

So I'll ride my dragonfly into the sky
I'll feel so alive as I fly
Into my secret place, my mystical world
All my troubles disappear
In my secret wonderland

This is a place where roses are blue
and all the leaves are crystal clear
The sky is not black nor blue
but somewhere inbetween,
Reflections in trees,
My secret hiding place.

No offense, but don't post this on someone else's topic.


NATT!!! OMGGG. That's the very first song you wrote?? It's amazing!!
And the second one, I really like. Very emotional and powerful.

Luna, thank you so much for your words

awesome

thank u

My song: How I Have To Believe

1. I stay above abyss
Nobody hears my scream
Dark clouds on the sky drive me to despair
Everything reminds me you
Streets losing their safety
Shapeless creations govern today
Someone calls me
But I don’t know who is he
Purple face, six hands
Is it reallity or only my dream?
Next step and again he goes to me
Oh God, give me hope for better day
You created me
But I don’t have strenght
“Kid, don’t scream”- he repeats it still
But how I have to believe?

Chorus:

I close my eyes
And stars go out
My dreams are set free
When you are with me

2. I check my mail box
Empty like always
Your words and photos
I can’t see their
I need you so much
Please, back to me
I can’t be alone
Don’t forget about love
You brought me flowers
And destroyed my soul
Are you happy?
You only hurt me
And don’t deserve to be with me
But I love you still
I can’t forget
You was all my life

Chorus:

I close my eyes
And stars go out
My dreams are set free
When you are with me

3. When I see you on the street
I can’t stop cry
I tried to die
But someone saved me
“Suicide isn’t answer”
I heard it many times
But I couldn’t chose
Now I know what’s good for me
Only sometimes it back to me
And I can’t see reallity
It made me stronger
It made me powerfull
I wanna be happy
I wanna be lovely
I found my key to believe
This is TRUE!!!

Chorus:

I close my eyes
And stars go out
My dreams are set free
When you are with me

And stars go out
When you are with me

with me….

Wow natt this is amazing!!!! I love it

aww thank you so much <3

this is new:

THE INVISIBLE

1.Empty mirror image overwhelms me
She throws me on the knees, holds in contempt, destroys.
I don’t see anything.
Nothing except for you.
With an ironic smile
She gazes at me.
Dreams, life
In an unexpected moment
You destroy it.
One motion you crosses out everything what I have.
With head held high
I take next blow.
I fall at your feet
But I am invincible.


Chorus:
All the secrets I put aside
I follow a new path
With a clear conscience
I don’t turn back
I’m growing moreover what surrounds me
I remove the demons from my head
I’m going the right way and..
I feel it.


2.The venompulsating in my veins
I lose my mind
I fall in your noose
Scars can’t stop bleeding
Fear says, horribile dictum
When you are with me
You called me fat
When I needed acceptance.
You took my youth
What do you want more?
The illusion- you are just that.
Please go away
And let me live.


Chorus:
All the secrets I put aside
I follow a new path
With a clear conscience
I don’t turn back
I’m growing moreover what surrounds me
I remove the demons from my head
I’m going the right way and..
I feel it.


Interlude:

You killsmore and more souls
I will not be next
Never, never, never
Whatever happens
You are only
An illusion, an illusion, an illusion
Delusion of my mind


Chorus:
All the secrets I put aside
I follow a new path
With a clear conscience
I don’t turn back
I’m growing moreover what surrounds me
I remove the demons from my head
I’m going the right way and..
I feel it.

I saw this on Facebook. I really like it. I can feel the pain in the song

I see some really powerfull lyrics, girl you have talent!

wow awesome. they all look great ♥

thank u so much <3

I really like the way you write <3 It's beautiful and emotional : s

Your song is awesome, you are a singer or just try to write a song?
If you are a singer then I want to listen you.

Eetu thank you so much, you dont know how much I like your songs


Hi wilsonjack230, thank you for nice words and I'm only someone who try to be writer... more my stuff is on my Facebook Page .. but I must often put there stuffs, last time I didn;t have time

https://www.facebook.com/pages/Forbidden/230210560408626

I like your face book page and the funny thing is for me when I open your page I see written Forbidden then

Ashleigh wrote:this needs a tune so if someone could help me I would really apreciate it! thanks!

Secret Wonderland
by...me!

While the world is burning
When the earth starts to quake
And love turns to hate

I'll ride my dragonfly into the sky
I'll feel so alive as I fly
Into my secret place, my mystical world
All my troubles disappear
In my secret wonderland.

They say I'm strange
They want me to change
I won't deny it, or try to hide it
But they just don't get me.

So I'll ride my dragonfly into the sky
I'll feel so alive as I fly
Into my secret place, my mystical world
All my troubles disappear
In my secret wonderland

This is a place where roses are blue
and all the leaves are crystal clear
The sky is not black nor blue
but somewhere inbetween,
Reflections in trees,
My secret hiding place.

:O THIS IS GENIUS!!! i could help by making a audio off the song and make a few edits,then you could make your own,very good ;]

Natt,you're so talented,your songs are amazing ♥ !!
Wow!

moonchild_amarah wrote:Natt,you're so talented,your songs are amazing ♥ !!
Wow!

thank u <3