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Post by cheekyu Thu Aug 05, 2010 2:18 pm

This time

Why did
I spend my time wasted on you
Why was I
so stupid the first time
But now you say
we should forget
But how can I
When I still regret

Ever holding your hand
Feeling like home
In your arms
But this time
But this time

I wont take it
This time
Im standing
For my own rights
Cause I know you
Think your in charge
But that was last time
One million years ago
But this time
This time
Im in charge

When I think
About that time we first kissed
Underneath a blossom tree
I cry
But not for long cause we both knew
That

Whenever we saw eachother
We weren’t meant be
Meant to be
But why do we still cry
Over so many sad times
Whhhy

I wont take it
This time
Im standing
For my own rights
Cause I know you
Think your in charge
But that was last time
One million years ago
But this time
This time
This time
Im in charge

You thought you were leading
Me in the right direction
I have no doubt
That you thought you were
I didn’t think you hurt me on purpose
But im still not convinced
That you were ever innocent
But now im saying sayinnnng


Don’t come back
This time
Im standing
For my own rights
Cause I know you
Think your in charge
But that was last time
One million years ago
But this time
This time
(2X)

im in charge


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Post by Natt Thu Aug 05, 2010 2:22 pm

This is very interesting. I like it Smile
Great job Smile
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Post by cheekyu Thu Aug 05, 2010 2:23 pm

WOW i only just posted that song and 1 comment alredy
thats got to be a record or somet
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Post by pixiedust19 Thu Aug 05, 2010 2:25 pm

thats awesome! i like it(: can u sing?? u should record yourself singing it!!!

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Post by Natt Thu Aug 05, 2010 2:25 pm

cheekyu wrote:WOW i only just posted that song and 1 comment alredy
thats got to be a record or somet

I see that you are very creative Wink
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Post by cheekyu Thu Aug 05, 2010 2:27 pm

i am
im also good at drawing
and dancing and acting
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Post by mimi Thu Aug 05, 2010 2:59 pm

cheekyu wrote:i am
im also good at drawing
and dancing and acting

could u record the songs for us then? because im sure its better to say our opinions if we can hear the melody Smile
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Post by Claudia Fri Aug 06, 2010 3:59 am

Agreeing with Mimi ^_^
And I notice your grammer has improved,

love it :]
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Post by mimi Fri Aug 06, 2010 5:25 am

the 'im in charge' reminds me of this story i wrote 2 years ago, i posted it in the stories section Smile
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Post by EetuJaKeijut Fri Aug 06, 2010 8:37 am

Pretty damn good, your great writer!
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Post by cheekyu Fri Aug 06, 2010 11:06 am

thanks i asked my dad about the recording and he said he'll try and get a new mic Smile
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Post by Guest Thu Dec 02, 2010 7:43 am

wow

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