A song (please comment i wanna no if u like it or not :) )

Can u read my mind?

Oh Oh
Oh Oh Ahhhhh

When ever i consider our relation ship, u no it u no it
when im dreaming about you, you feel it you feel it
its like you can
it like you almost can
read myy
read myy

You read my miind
its like you feel when im in love
its like you know what im thinking of
you read my ohhh
you read my ohhh
you read my ohhh
you read myy.....

when im feeling sad ,you feel it you feel it
when im feeling like betraying , ohhhhh you know ittt
it like you feel my feelings
its like you almost can feel myy feelings
you feel my feeling tooo yeah yeah yeah yeah

You read my miind
its like you feel when im in love
its like you know what im thinking of
it like you know just what i waant
you read my ohhh
you read my ohhh
you read my ohhh
you read myy.....

its like the answers are written on my head
because you always know the the words tht im gonna sed
he feels it believes it ohhhhhhh
yeah i feel like hes miine
and he nos i do
yh he makes me happpy

you read myyyyy
you read my read my MMMIIINNDDD
its like you feel when im in love
its like you no waht im thinkin off
yeah what im thinking off YEEEAAAHHH
(4X)

You read my miiind you read my you read my
you read my mind
you read my......

This could be a great song :]
I love it, I wish I could write songs, but I'm not at that level yet XD so I'm sticking around poetry until I have gained some skills.

Great Me and my sister wrote a song.. but ours always turn out like a joke.

thx for saying its a gud song and me and my cousin made up this really random song when we were lil il might show it u but its hilarious

You do us Proud thats some good work

Thanks Everyone

Pretty good but i was bit distracted by the amount of grammatical errors specially from fluent speaker :p
Anyways keep it up i want to read more of these!

thanks

Amazing!! You are wonderful talent

hi guys can u help me i keep getting like gud ideas for songs N stuff
but then i sing it out loud and the title turns into like different words do u have any gud words for songs

nice!

No, I don't like it. I love it

awww thanx

very britney spear's