Fake & Plastic

Pushed away by Rejection
You want to be like them.
Flawless with Perfection
At the hands of an injection.

Standing next to your Mr Fantastic
I see no love.
My dear friend you gone plastic
What happen to you?

Are you happy now?
Is this what you want?
To be fake like them
This is the wrong choice my friend.

You grow up too fast
Wanting to move on
From your terrible past.
I should have known.

Kinda like the song, Not A Barbie Doll.
My poem verison of it :]

Nice, i can totally relate to this

Thanks :]

I love it- and the concept of it :]

Thank you, I had the first verse annoying me for ages XD

I think that is really good

and maybe when katie price was 13 we should have told her then
cause when she was 14 she had it done

Claudia wrote:Thank you, I had the first verse annoying me for ages XD

Hehe, I'm like that with poems. I get an idea in my head and it nags me until I write it down. It's usually only worth a couple of lines or so and I have no idea what else to write apart from that, but whenever I sit down and write a whole poem seems to flow from one idea.

I really like the idea behind this poem, it's really relevant. People are wanting too much to be "perfect". The first verse is great, I like that part in particular

I had to pull the rest of the poem from my head

Hmm I wonder what Kerli would think of my poems, I should formspring her!
:]

very unique!!! I love it

that's an awesome poem.

Thanks Matthew :]

<33333333 and that's all i can say ^^

Cool..This reminds me of the song stupid girls by pink..nice

It does? Ha, I haven't listen to that song in ages XD

u know i was thinking fo not a barbie doll before i finished the poem and saw what u had written.

its beautiful. quite sad and as tyra would say FIERCE

XD haha thanks

yeah,kind of...It has the same idea..How she was talking about how girls act adnd look so fake now...

The world is full of fake babrbie dolls.

beautiful_inside20 wrote:The world is full of fake babrbie dolls.

Unfortunately, it's true

Yeah, I've come across a few during my school years, and I'm sure I'll meet several more. But, if that's the way these people choose to be, you can't help it. I'm glad I'm happy the way I am. There's no such thing as perfection; all people have their flaws. No matter how hard someone may try to look flawless on the outside, there will almost definitely be something festering underneath...not so pretty when you look beyond the skin

Perfection is so wonderful but nobody isn't perfect

KerliKoivPoland wrote:

beautiful_inside20 wrote:The world is full of fake babrbie dolls.

Unfortunately, it's true

very true

the inner beauty always shines through

yes and you also make real and true friends if you be yourself.

Claudia wrote:yes and you also make real and true friends if you be yourself.

that's very wise & so very true..Wish more people thinked like that.