Character Ideas for Graphic Novels. Need Opinions!

So, I have been working on some rough ideas of characters I would love to use in a graphic novel series. I need opinions on them and suggestions. These are mostly simple rough sketched ideas ^^

Escaped convict dark clown caught in the gaze of a guard's. Beam
Run clown run
Damm them pain killers are good lol
Anymore?

God's earlier attempt of eve Adam was not pleased not pleased at all
A rib for this lol

Your art is really good *

thank you ^^

Maybe a. Altered reality where identity is stripped back to basics

That clown is so scary but I guess you wanted that
And the second picture is also great. I like them both

thank you ^^

I like them, kind of a darker version of Coraline.