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A rare peek into a strange girl's lifee.

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Post by PoeticAbomination(: Thu Dec 29, 2011 2:14 pm

Here are some of my poems. They mean a lot to me, so I really hope that you like them. I have 40+, so obiously I won't be putting all of them...at least right now. I only write about personal experiences, so they aren't fake, they are as real as it gets.

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New You
As soon as she came into your life
She replaced me just like that
You never bothered to say goodbye
Or spare a passing glance

I didn't know it was possible
To be hurt so very bad
Now whenever I'm around you
I can't help but be so sad

Now I miss the old you
The one who loved me most
This is taking some getting-used-to
Because the new you I don't know

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Free
Scattered all across the floor
Lie broken dreams and many more
Promises you've never kept
And lies that make you less adept
In my eyes and in my heart
Today is when we'll finally part

No more lies and no more shame
No more guilt from playing your games
Thank you lord for this glorious day
In which I finally learned to stay away

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Well, I can't remember any more of them right now. lol, I left them at home.(I'm currently away from home) So more...later?(: Tell me what you thinkk. Constructive criticisms welcome!(: And my signature is a free verse that I wrote a couple months agoo. It's called "Okay."
Well, enjoy. Kthxbaii.


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Post by Riley Sun Jan 01, 2012 4:53 pm

When I read poetry, I tend to make a melody and sing them in my head, and 'Free' would be a very good rock song, sounding like Evanescence and Paramore together. (:
I really like them though, they're very good.
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Post by PoeticAbomination(: Wed Jan 04, 2012 2:41 pm

Haha, thankss(: I was actually just listening to Paramore when I read that. lol
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