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Post by Garrettar Sat Jul 16, 2011 3:32 am

Here's the poems I have written.

Poem 1:

Born a child,
Same as the rest.
Been far different,
But not for the best.

He shows you who he is,
You are far from impressed
You torment the child,
He becomes depressed.

Poem 2:

He found a hope,
That gave him his wish.
He remembered forever,
His first loves kiss.

Poem 3:

Everyone is here
We all cause tears
It's time to overcome
The hate in our ears


The poem basically means, People hurt others, don't let yourself get hurt Smile
OR
The Poem basically means, People will not like your individuality, but don't listen and be who you are Smile!

Poem 4:

Desperate to fit in
Now the one which all would fall
The empty insecurities inside
But still the king of it all

Meaning: Someone who becomes popular per say and becomes super insecure and conceited. (Highschool Related)

Those are my poems Wink. Thanks I.L.U
- Garrett A. R.


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Post by Garrettar Fri Aug 12, 2011 3:20 pm

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Post by wolfeh Sun Aug 14, 2011 3:03 pm

Aww, no more poems for us? You should keep writing. I like reading. Smile
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Post by Riley Sun Aug 14, 2011 3:55 pm

I agree, you should write more. Those are really cool. Very Happy
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Post by Garrettar Fri Aug 19, 2011 9:34 pm

Thanks Smile I really appreciate those comments. I think i might Smile
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