The Old-Fashioned Sweet Shop
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The Old-Fashioned Sweet Shop
So I decided to write a nicer poem!
There is a place, a magical place
Where cotton candy makes a cloud
The gobstoppers tastes oh so different
Where people are free to be loud
There is a place, a magical place
Where the doors are made from candy canes
The floor is made from sour sweets
And chocolate adorns the window panes
There is a place, a magical place
Where the tables are made from toffee
The counter is made from nougat
And the chairs taste like banoffee
There is a place, a magical place
Where the jars are full of walnut whips
Chupa Chups are given away free
The taste of jelly beans you lick off your lips
There is a place, a magical place
Where the bubblegum goes POP
Because, of course, this is by far the best
Old-Fashioned Sweet Shop!
I hope you like it! I love sweets and have recently become addicted to chewing gum and bubblegum. In fact, my love of sweet things inspired this poem x
There is a place, a magical place
Where cotton candy makes a cloud
The gobstoppers tastes oh so different
Where people are free to be loud
There is a place, a magical place
Where the doors are made from candy canes
The floor is made from sour sweets
And chocolate adorns the window panes
There is a place, a magical place
Where the tables are made from toffee
The counter is made from nougat
And the chairs taste like banoffee
There is a place, a magical place
Where the jars are full of walnut whips
Chupa Chups are given away free
The taste of jelly beans you lick off your lips
There is a place, a magical place
Where the bubblegum goes POP
Because, of course, this is by far the best
Old-Fashioned Sweet Shop!
I hope you like it! I love sweets and have recently become addicted to chewing gum and bubblegum. In fact, my love of sweet things inspired this poem x
MoonChildEve- Posts : 773
Join date : 2011-02-06
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Location : the place of dreams and giant ice cream tubs
Re: The Old-Fashioned Sweet Shop
So I'm now making a poem book for Kerli x I'm sending it with my letter and I'm adding this song x
MoonChildEve- Posts : 773
Join date : 2011-02-06
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Re: The Old-Fashioned Sweet Shop
Your poem very good affect on thr imagination. Epithets create magic and fairy-tale atmosphere. Very good work. Yes, I think that she will be very happy when she will read your art.
Re: The Old-Fashioned Sweet Shop
Thank you x
The book is all about imaginative things, after all!
The book is all about imaginative things, after all!
MoonChildEve- Posts : 773
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Age : 25
Location : the place of dreams and giant ice cream tubs
Re: The Old-Fashioned Sweet Shop
I'm currently making the book. It's gonna be super sweet!
MoonChildEve- Posts : 773
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Re: The Old-Fashioned Sweet Shop
very cuite
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