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Post by Dionnnn Sat Mar 05, 2011 9:20 pm

I made this poem when i was feeling very shitty one day and cried myself to sleep. Nothing good, don't really make sense, just felt like that's the only way to express.
It's something like a song, but to me, poems are just lyrics without a melody.




My Mask:
All of you see me as a happy child.
But you do not know who i am.
None of you can see me hiding behind my smile.
Even when i'm with them.

Nobody notices what's happening to me.
They don't even try.
I don't even know what i'm trying to be.
As i watch the day go by.


No one knows what it's like to be me,
I just want somebody to ask.
It's not like i wanna gain sympathy,
but i just wanna see what i hide behind my mask.


As i walk through the hall facing down
I am invisible.
Behind my smile, i'm having a frown.
Inside, dying so little.

No one knows what it's like to be me,
I just want somebody to ask.
It's not like i wanna gain sympathy,
but i just wanna see what i hide behind my mask.


It'll be too late once you realized what happened.
Where things isn't totally different from what you have listened.
I'm ending this tonight,
I'm giving up the fight.
I just hope maybe next time you will be there and everything will be all right.
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Post by Guest Sat Mar 05, 2011 10:17 pm

Captures the emotion quite well.

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Post by serenitypixie Mon Mar 07, 2011 10:30 am

awh, i can relate. hope you are feeling better now <3
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Post by Dionnnn Tue Mar 08, 2011 5:40 am

Thanks! Feeling loads better. It's just a random emotion, i get it all the time. :d
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Post by serenitypixie Tue Mar 08, 2011 9:01 pm

glad to hear I love you
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Post by Dionnnn Thu Mar 10, 2011 7:39 am

Thanks! Love you too. Very Happy <3
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Post by Natt Sat Mar 26, 2011 2:58 am

I like how you describe your emotions. This is so good poem
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Post by Dionnnn Sat Mar 26, 2011 8:06 am

Thank you! It means alot. Smile
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Post by EetuJaKeijut Sat Mar 26, 2011 8:21 am

This is just brilliant.
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Post by MoonChildEve Sat Mar 26, 2011 8:24 am

I feel glad that you're feeling better! It's horrible crying yourself to sleep, isn't it. Beautiful poem x
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Post by Dionnnn Sat Mar 26, 2011 11:10 pm

I felt like the whole world ignored me and hated me. So i started to pen down what i thought and how i felt. It just became this really dark poem that seems to kill all the happiness in a room. :l.
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Post by Natt Sun Mar 27, 2011 9:16 am

Dionnn, I understand what you felt and writing very help, desciribe what you feel and will be better
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Post by Krissy Sun Mar 27, 2011 12:50 pm

very well done

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Post by Dionnnn Wed Mar 30, 2011 12:58 am

Thanks alot! You guys are reallllllly nice!
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