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Post by robotbox_x Mon Dec 27, 2010 2:09 pm

Infinity Begins

Sweet melancholic notes
You whisper to me the delight
The setting suns, moons, and universes
at the ends of the earth.
Love and life spilling into the horrific void.
Chillingly cold music resonates the chasm.
A twistingly lovely death to each
whom the sound reaches
But not us; no, no.

No, no
Poisonously impervious to its touch
It shys from our ears
Even death fears defiance and insurrection.

Dipped low in your arms we dangle upon the prepice that juts from the ruins
where was once where we belonged.
Roaring oceans drain themselves into the nothingness:
A swirling cascade, sifting ominously in all directions.

No last look back
All too well we know what we leave behind
Falsehoods, liars, cheaters
Backstabbers, murderers, reapers.
A land so drenched in blood
The rivers run red, and the sky rains crimson.
A land with fires spawned by hate
thus they can incinerate the very soul.

Forward into the starlit abyss
Take my hand my dear
Together we plunge into darkness
Together we never go home again
Together a jump into foolish death
And we will make our rendezvous with eternity.



I wrote this a while back, I thought I would share. Comments and critiques are welcome.

Not to be used without my permission
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Post by Krissy Thu Dec 30, 2010 7:56 am

Very nice..Deep!

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Post by robotbox_x Thu Dec 30, 2010 11:56 am

thank you, I was trying to encompass a very dark but powerful place in this piece
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Post by Krissy Sat Jan 01, 2011 7:05 pm

robotbox_x wrote:thank you, I was trying to encompass a very dark but powerful place in this piece

and you did it very well! Very Happy

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Post by robotbox_x Tue Jan 04, 2011 11:05 pm

hehe thank yah much
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Post by Natt Tue Jan 11, 2011 1:49 pm

This is very wise poem. I see many elements your poem in my head Smile
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Post by robotbox_x Wed Jan 12, 2011 9:16 am

thank you ^_^ I love trying to inspire fantastical pictures in peoples heads..and my own ;]
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Post by Natt Wed Jan 12, 2011 9:21 am

you're welcome,dear
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