OllieAburame

My poem about love~ I hope you like it guys~ ^_^

Its the treasure to last eternally,
to have in your heart forever.
So put it in your spirit,
its now or never.
First you need some respect,
something to never lack.
If you put your mind to it,
even if you lose some you'll get it back.
Number two is trust,
something to never bypass.
and if you always have that,
you'll true feelings will forever last.
Last but not least is honesty,
something to always keep at hand.
And If you use it right,
it'll help you across the never ending land.
Finally we have finished,
the masterpiece sent from heaven above.
Oh what is it you say?
Why its nothing other then LOVE.

wow *__* ~ It's amazing! i wish i write something like that.. I need to get on with mine!

Good luck!! ",

butterflycryx3 wrote:wow *__* ~ It's amazing! i wish i write something like that.. I need to get on with mine!

Good luck!! ",

Thank you do much ^_^ I can't wait to read yours~

its beautiful, and u know what, i could really imagine it being in a poition book under the 'love potions'

I love it! I could see it too in a potion book

wooooooow *-*
it's like a real recepy xD
it's kidna like you know like... uhhmmm.... you know when like someone is looking for treasure and they have to guess some kinda riddle to get the treasure or something? it sounds exactly like it xD
I LOVE it

Wow, this is awesome! Love it!

Thank you all so much ^_^ I can't wait to read all of yours~ I bet they'll be much better then mine

mimi wrote:its beautiful, and u know what, i could really imagine it being in a poition book under the 'love potions' :)

i agree. it is not only beautiful, but i could also see this in a potion book x]]

good

What a divinely appetizing potion! I especially like the order you mixed the ingredients. I hope you don't mind my interpretation: respect for those who came before you, trust in their good intentions all around, and honesty to reflect it back - Love really is as simple as 1-2-3!

wow. this is so so so beautiful and unique.

very pretty

Omigod, this great.
/jealousssssss
You're actually a good writer unlike me *-*

waahhh! I loved it really! The way you picked the words, the wy they matched! Like a real poem!

wow.good

cool

OllieAburame wrote:Finally we have finished,
the masterpiece sent from heaven above.
Oh what is it you say?
Why its nothing other then LOVE.

such a gorgeous ending to a gorgeous poem ^^ you're really good at writing/rhyming! TEACH MEEE xD

good luck <3

wow its absolutley amazing!! i cant wait to read more poems i love this!! good luck

this is really good!

Thank you all so much...I started drying when I read these all...no ones ever complimented my writing before....

well i love reading and this is my first time writing anything im use to drawing though..pictures tell stories cant they?

Loveisalwaysthere! wrote:well i love reading and this is my first time writing anything im use to drawing though..pictures tell stories cant they?

Exactly! I wanna see of your drawings ^_^ I bet you're awesome at drawing~ I suck at it xP