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Post by PROUDLIKECOW Fri Jul 30, 2010 10:05 am

innocence birthed ignorance
how that flower pours like showers!
our good soil becomes soiled
it's too much, I need His canopy
nurtured beauty of Her fruit feeds me
while my root uplifts thee
cruel men rule our stage
the young girls' minds shine a new age
but in the rapture of their moment
lets not forget where we come from
lest we must live to die again
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Post by Iridescent_Revival_<3 Fri Jul 30, 2010 10:12 am

PROUDLIKECOW wrote:innocence birthed ignorance

<3 favourite line Smile

probably because i've always thought of innocence as justified ignorance.... probably not what you meant lol sorry i'm bad at interpretations but i do love the imagery ^^ well done!
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Post by out of the hollow Fri Jul 30, 2010 10:16 am

I like it. Smile I'm going to have to let it sit with me for awhile.
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Post by PROUDLIKECOW Fri Jul 30, 2010 10:20 am

Thanks for the feedback! The words just sprouted out of me effortlessly like dew drops in this dawn.
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Post by Iridescent_Revival_<3 Fri Jul 30, 2010 10:23 am

PROUDLIKECOW wrote:Thanks for the feedback! The words just sprouted out of me effortlessly like dew drops in this dawn.

omg you're so eloquent!! lol ENVY!!!
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Post by Claudia Fri Jul 30, 2010 5:52 pm

This is beautiful :] I love it.
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Post by TheLastSongbird Sat Jul 31, 2010 3:26 pm

Beautiful ^^ I feel the message in this poem.

PROUDLIKECOW wrote:lets not forget where we come from

I completely agree with this. So many of us have forgotten who we truly are and where we're from, but I always try to remember.
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Post by Natt Sun Aug 01, 2010 6:38 am

so amazing!!!!!
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Post by Guest Fri Aug 06, 2010 8:36 am

good

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Post by Guest Thu Dec 02, 2010 7:45 am

Unfortunately.true

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