Midnight Murder

It was a cold night of silence
Disturbed by a torturous violence

Of pain curling screams
Came from a little boy as it seems

Dragged ruthlessly from the safety of his bed
Gasp his last breath and now he was dead

Wounded in the chest, he was stabbed repeatedly
The mad killer had fled the blooded scene immediately

At the stroke of midnight did this horrific event occur.
Rumours spread; the killer was the boy’s mentor

But no evidences were found to the Killer’s delight
Now lies a tale of a boy who died at midnight.



second poem :] it came to me at 10PM at night, wrote most of it down before I went back to bed. I did more at school, we had to do a narrative poem and so I continue with that. My teacher read it and said it was dark and creepy. Something Kerli-ish for once :]

Wow, it's awesome LOVE IT!

Why thank you :] I have no clue how this idea pop into my head.

i know it's like sometimes you get inspired and write stuff that you never even thought about before

that always happens to me at about 11pm or at midnight but i can't write anything cuz i'm sleepy and the next morning i either forget evrything or it doesn't seem to be such a great idea after all

but this poem is just awesome

Thank you again :]

i think i wouldnt of got to sleep if i had thought of tht at night but who cares wat tht teacher thinks IT ROXZ

haha thanks. I thought the teacher would of sent me to the counsellor, but she liked it :]

kool i loved it

This is very interesting

i really like this one :]

clever rhymes, though the topic is disturbed...
But it's a really good poem

XD haha it is disturbing, something that would be good to tell for a scary story.

i LOVE haunting poems like this

gawsh Claudia, how is it that i'm only discovering your poems now!?

I do not know XD

interesting

creepy