A poem i wrote o-o

ts a poem... i think o_o
it needs a name xD


Am i the only one who sees
The darkness is consuming me
I'll make a difference while i can
So scream my name and hold my hand
catch me when im falling down
and lights are floating all around
explosions of emotion burst
you and I are badly hurt
I scream and cry as you hold me tight
and fire lights the darkest night
Shivering hands pick me up
escaping is our best of luck
You run across the colored field
and from where we came we hear
a creepy voice as you set me down
we both quickly turn around
and watch as the colors fade to blue
with watery eyes i look at you
and thank you for being there for me
as the sunrise turns the sky pink
"It's beautiful," you softly whisper
The tall grass tickles our ankles like whiskers
or a cat as we quietly sit down
I put my hand on my leg and look around
"Are you hurt?" My voice quivers as i try to hide
That im bleeding from inside
"No," You say as you look at me
I look down and you say "but, i see
you are" and my face turns red
"its nothing..." I tell an obvious lie as blood gushes out form my leg
You pick me up and carry me away
As the sky turns orange that day
I close my eyes and gently smile.
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So if you think you have a good name for it tell me
I dont think its too got :T
Some of it doesnt make much sense
i was trying to make it rhyme so... yeah lol

It's very good, and makes me a little sad .. how about "The Darkest Sunrise' ? lol idkkk

i really like it:)
It reminds me of my own personal things, but yeah very good poem!!


p.s. I'm not sure what to call it, kind of pointless for me to type thing because i barely ever name my things i write. Cant ever name them lol Dont know why.