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Your Scars
by MoonChildEve Fri Mar 25, 2011 11:55 am
We see your scars
They're still red and raw
Please, wash the blood away
Before you come knocking at our door
We see your hatred
In your bloodshot eyes
Don't hate, love always wins
And we don't tell lies
Don't take your anger out on us
Don't you remember integrity, love and unity?
We'll stop making such a fuss
Put your hate away
There's no point threatening to harm
So just sit and stay
Look at our innocent, loving faces
Look us straight in the eyes
Our eyes are no longer empty spaces
Come and sit, let us join hands
The angels are with us
Telling us about forgotton lands
So please, wash the blood away
Before you come knocking at our door
Then perhaps one day
Your scars won't be so red and raw
Do you like it? I'm putting it in my book of poems. I hope you like it. I know I do.
They're still red and raw
Please, wash the blood away
Before you come knocking at our door
We see your hatred
In your bloodshot eyes
Don't hate, love always wins
And we don't tell lies
Don't take your anger out on us
Don't you remember integrity, love and unity?
We'll stop making such a fuss
Put your hate away
There's no point threatening to harm
So just sit and stay
Look at our innocent, loving faces
Look us straight in the eyes
Our eyes are no longer empty spaces
Come and sit, let us join hands
The angels are with us
Telling us about forgotton lands
So please, wash the blood away
Before you come knocking at our door
Then perhaps one day
Your scars won't be so red and raw
Do you like it? I'm putting it in my book of poems. I hope you like it. I know I do.
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Re: Your Scars
by jeanmeneghelli Fri Mar 25, 2011 1:14 pm
"So please, wash the blood away
Before you come knocking at our door
Then perhaps one day
Your scars won't be so red and raw"
Love it ♥ Its really good. Yeah i really like it.
Before you come knocking at our door
Then perhaps one day
Your scars won't be so red and raw"
Love it ♥ Its really good. Yeah i really like it.
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Re: Your Scars
by Natt Sat Mar 26, 2011 3:13 am
OMG!!!! This is so beautiful,really. Now, I cry...I love your poem. I don't know what I can write....
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Re: Your Scars
by MoonChildEve Sat Mar 26, 2011 5:46 am
Thank you for your lovely comment. Please don't cry! It would make me feel bad!KerliPoland wrote:OMG!!!! This is so beautiful,really. Now, I cry...I love your poem. I don't know what I can write....
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Re: Your Scars
by Natt Sun Mar 27, 2011 9:13 am
MoonChildEve wrote:Thank you for your lovely comment. Please don't cry! It would make me feel bad!KerliPoland wrote:OMG!!!! This is so beautiful,really. Now, I cry...I love your poem. I don't know what I can write....
Please, don't feel bad... I cried because I felt in my heart your poem
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