Re: A song for Kerli

by Scarlet Mon Jun 14, 2010 12:21 pm

After all that, I think there shouldn't be anymore lyrics, just music. A huge, long, instrumental. Not so long that it's annoying, but just long enough to communicate a whole bunch of beauty. ^-^ It should have all kinds of different instruments, soar and sink, and at different points just have one instrument singled out, like a soft piano or chimes. I think that'd be beautiful!

What do the rest of you think?

by Lilee Mon Jun 14, 2010 12:31 pm

Scarlet wrote:After all that, I think there shouldn't be anymore lyrics, just music. A huge, long, instrumental. Not so long that it's annoying, but just long enough to communicate a whole bunch of beauty. ^-^ It should have all kinds of different instruments, soar and sink, and at different points just have one instrument singled out, like a soft piano or chimes. I think that'd be beautiful!

What do the rest of you think?

No offense, but can you change your font color? It's a little hard to read ^^;

I like the idea of a an instrumental at this point. And then maybe repeat the chorus again at the very end.

by pixiedust19 Mon Jun 14, 2010 12:35 pm

Lilee wrote:
Scarlet wrote:After all that, I think there shouldn't be anymore lyrics, just music. A huge, long, instrumental. Not so long that it's annoying, but just long enough to communicate a whole bunch of beauty. ^-^ It should have all kinds of different instruments, soar and sink, and at different points just have one instrument singled out, like a soft piano or chimes. I think that'd be beautiful!

What do the rest of you think?

I like the idea of a an instrumental at this point. And then maybe repeat the chorus again at the very end.

yes. i like that idea of having an instrumental part but i also agree that the chorus should repeat at the end.

by IvanSpirit7 Mon Jun 14, 2010 2:02 pm

Ok,sry guys but I found this very,very,very fanatical...

"Fellow MoonChildren, we will change the world"

No further comment...

Wink

by Guest Mon Jun 14, 2010 2:04 pm

maybe if we make this words Kerli can sing a song of it for us Moonchildren!!!!!!! Exclamation

by pixiedust19 Mon Jun 14, 2010 2:17 pm

what genre of music do you think this song should be?

by Scarlet Mon Jun 14, 2010 2:30 pm

Lilee wrote:No offense, but can you change your font color? It's a little hard to read ^^;

Hehe.... my apologies. Is this better or just obnoxious?

Lilee wrote:yes. i like that idea of having an instrumental part but i also agree that the chorus should repeat at the end.

And yes, the chorus repeating at the end would be lovely. Smile

pixiedust19 wrote:what genre of music do you think this song should be?

Umm.... a mix! I think it should be slightly electronic, and then also just regular musical instruments in there. Something that makes you feel happy and uplifted. Smile

But really, it's just whatever genre it turns out to be; maybe it'd be better not to aim for a specific one!

by Guest Mon Jun 14, 2010 2:31 pm

pixiedust19 wrote:what genre of music do you think this song should be?

we should let Kerli choose when she is write the music for the words we make Smile

by Lilee Mon Jun 14, 2010 5:48 pm

@Scarlett, no that's perfect ^^ Sorry for my bossiness =P

Edit- Should we start going over the song now?

by Scarlet Mon Jun 14, 2010 7:39 pm

Lilee wrote:@Scarlett, no that's perfect ^^ Sorry for my bossiness =P

No, you're not bossy; I'm glad you told me. Smile

Lilee wrote:Edit- Should we start going over the song now?

We should, and we shall! Except, I can't right now and can't for maybe ten hours. But, by all means, get started without me.... I'll step in later if I need to. Smile

by pixiedust19 Mon Jun 14, 2010 11:24 pm

Editing time!
This is my secret place where I
Capture dreams in the starlit sky
And chase the rainbows flying by
Until the moon and stars unite
I'll be the shelter that holds you tight

Fighting away everything that I
Behold and fear so tell me why
You let go just (no that?) once when
Faeries swirl by, a feeling so zen
So come to the other side with me, my friend

[Chorus]
I promise our unity will bring love forth
If we stand together and believe
A world of hope and gentle warmth
We will rise up if you just stay with me
We will hug the moon and kiss the Earth
Goodbye to all that holds us back; this is our rebirth
[End chorus]

Fellow MoonChildren, we will change the world

i was thinking that since we arent gonna start a 2nd verse if during the music intermisson thing if there could be like a whisper of the words "fellow MoonChildren, we will change the world" kinda like in saima where she talks in Estonian. get what im saying?

by pixiedust19 Mon Jun 14, 2010 11:24 pm

srry i didnt have much to edit(: lol

by Lilee Tue Jun 15, 2010 7:52 am

My edit. I changed a lot, sorry! Please don't hurt me Shocked

This is my secret place where I
Capture dreams in the luminous sky
Chasing the faeries swirling by
And as the moon and stars unite
I'll be the shelter that holds you tight

Fighting away everything that I
Behold and fear so tell me why
You let go just that once when
The night had left us feeling so zen
Won't you come to the other side with me, my friend?

[Chorus]
I promise our unity will bring love forth
If we stand together and believe
A world of hope will bring gentle warmth
We will rise up if you just stay with me
We will hug the moon and kiss the Earth
Goodbye to all that holds us back; this is our rebirth
[End chorus?]

Together MoonChildren, we will change the world

by mimi Tue Jun 15, 2010 9:12 am

My edit.

This is my secret place where I
Capture dreams in the luminous sky
Chasing the fairies swirling by
And as the moon and stars unite
They'll be the shelter that holds you tight

Fighting away everything that I
Behold and fear, so why
Did you let go when
The night had left us
And there was nowhere else to go

[Chorus]
I promise our unity will bring love forth
If we stand together and believe
A world of hope will bring gentle warmth
We will rise up if you just stay with me
We will hug the moon and kiss the Earth
Goodbye to all that holds us back; this is our rebirth
[End chorus?]

Together MoonChildren, we will change the world

by Lilee Tue Jun 15, 2010 2:41 pm

Adding on to Mimi's edit. Not sure if it sounds right though O_o

This is my secret place where I
Capture dreams in the luminous sky
Chasing the fairies swirling by
And as the moon and stars unite
They'll be the shelter that holds you tight

Fighting away everything that I
Behold and fear, so why
Did you let go when
The night had left us alone again
And there was nowhere else to go

[Chorus]
I promise our unity will bring love forth
If we stand together and believe
A world of hope will bring gentle warmth
We will rise up if you just stay with me
We will hug the moon and kiss the Earth
Goodbye to all that holds us back; this is our rebirth
[End chorus?]

Together MoonChildren, we will change the world

by loonylovegood Tue Jun 15, 2010 2:49 pm

that was my only edit, i thought it made it sound more fluid

This is my secret place where I
Capture dreams in the luminous sky
Chasing the fairies swirling by
And as the moon and stars unite
They'll be the shelter that holds you tight

Fighting away everything that I
Behold and fear, so tell me why
Did you let go of us when
The night had left us alone again
And there was nowhere else to go

[Chorus]
I promise our unity will bring love forth
If we stand together and believe
A world of hope will bring gentle warmth
We will rise up if you just stay with me
We will hug the moon and kiss the Earth
Goodbye to all that holds us back; this is our rebirth
[End chorus?]

Together MoonChildren, we will change the world

by Sunnech Tue Jun 15, 2010 9:56 pm

y crean la verdad de lo que puedes creer
a la vez tratando de recordar
lo que ya no es mas...

and create the truth of what you believe while trying to remember what is no longer more ...

by Sunnech Tue Jun 15, 2010 10:12 pm

Trying to create and fly
is not only a story but
but a reality
that we are strong
believing and living what we see

You can be here
between fairies and magic, between light and darkness
you just have to love and happiness really come
A moment of peace, quiet time and your world will flourish...

I'm not good at writing in English ... and I speak Spanish ... but everything is for Kerli ...

by Lilee Wed Jun 16, 2010 2:56 pm

@loonylovegood- I like it! Smile

@Sunnech- ??? Did you want to add that to our song, or is that something separate?

by Sunnech Wed Jun 16, 2010 6:57 pm

I don't know .... attempt to continue but ... I can not think of anything more than that .... jujuju

by pixiedust19 Thu Jun 17, 2010 2:58 am

anyone else think theres anything left to edit?

by mimi Thu Jun 17, 2010 4:44 am

Well.. i think ill have to close this topic because the song is now sent off Smile

by mimi Thu Jun 17, 2010 4:44 am

we can start a new song so that we could make the music as well, but since SOMEONE wanted the lyrics already, i sent them off. can't name any names but im sure you can figure out who Very Happy

lol

by Lilee Thu Jun 17, 2010 6:50 am

mimi wrote:Well.. i think ill have to close this topic because the song is now sent off

...

by mimi Thu Jun 17, 2010 6:53 am

I know, Im sorry for not telling u all like 2 days ahead, but i got the email and i had to send the lyrics off..

FORGIVE ME Very Happy

by loonylovegood Thu Jun 17, 2010 8:14 am

That's so cool! I hope that someone enjoys it.

by IvanSpirit7 Thu Jun 17, 2010 4:27 pm

mimi wrote:we can start a new song so that we could make the music as well, but since SOMEONE wanted the lyrics already, i sent them off. can't name any names but im sure you can figure out who lol

That would be good...
And song could be better...(less fanatical)

Wink

by mimi Fri Jun 18, 2010 1:44 am

we'll get it back soon enough Smile

she's making the tune for the song!

by dreamsdontsleep Fri Jun 18, 2010 1:49 am

Did you send the song to Kerli? O_O
wowowowow.

by mimi Fri Jun 18, 2010 1:50 am

haaahaaa who else would that 'someone' be?? Very Happy

by Guest Fri Jun 18, 2010 10:52 am

i knew it!

by Lilee Fri Jun 18, 2010 3:40 pm

Please let us know what she thinks of it ^^

by mimi Sun Jun 20, 2010 10:38 am

You will hear it yourself Smile

i can't say anymore details because its gonna be a surprise, but its gonna be in a very special form for all the moonchildren who participate in the mission Smile

by Lilee Sun Jun 20, 2010 10:51 am

Awesome! I can't wait Smile

by mimi Sun Jun 20, 2010 10:56 am

neither can i to be honest
i hate to keep you waiting but because kerli also wants it to be really special it needs more time. but because *fingers crossed* the single comes out in july, the mission will be out a little before that!

by Gretta Sun Jun 20, 2010 1:23 pm

O.M.G.

SOOO HAPPY!!!! cheers

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