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The Glorious Bird
by moonchild_amarah Sun Aug 15, 2010 12:09 am
A glorious bird glances at me,
i'm not sure if you can see,
he tries to fly with broken wings,
no big deal cause he still sings,
that he ought to fly without a single sound,
doesn't seem to interest him,
cause there's magic all around!
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just a poem i've once written for a song^^
don't know if you can see sense in it
i.l.u. ☻O☻
Sarah-Luis Fischer Pham Fischdotter
i'm not sure if you can see,
he tries to fly with broken wings,
no big deal cause he still sings,
that he ought to fly without a single sound,
doesn't seem to interest him,
cause there's magic all around!
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just a poem i've once written for a song^^
don't know if you can see sense in it
i.l.u. ☻O☻
Sarah-Luis Fischer Pham Fischdotter
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Re: The Glorious Bird
by moonchild_amarah Sun Aug 15, 2010 9:09 am
KerliKoivPoland wrote:so wonderful!!!! THIS IS MAGIC!!!
oh thank you
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Re: The Glorious Bird
by Natt Sun Aug 15, 2010 1:59 pm
moonchild_amarah wrote:KerliKoivPoland wrote:so wonderful!!!! THIS IS MAGIC!!!
oh thank you
you're welcome
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Re: The Glorious Bird
by TheLastSongbird Wed Aug 18, 2010 4:33 am
This is lovely! I can see so much meaning in the words. Beautiful <3
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Re: The Glorious Bird
by PROUDLIKECOW Thu Aug 19, 2010 10:00 am
I love this poem! It reminds me of my favorite song by the Beatles, "Blackbird." The parallels are quite remarkable. I'm not accusing you of copying or anything, it's supposed to be a compliment. Keep 'em coming!
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Re: The Glorious Bird
by moonchild_amarah Fri Aug 20, 2010 5:11 am
PROUDLIKECOW wrote:I love this poem! It reminds me of my favorite song by the Beatles, "Blackbird." The parallels are quite remarkable. I'm not accusing you of copying or anything, it's supposed to be a compliment. Keep 'em coming!
oh thank you
but well,i don't even know this song i shall listen to it ((:
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