Bitter Harsh Words

It was actually inspired from a fight that happened yesterday

What did I do wrong?
To deserve your heated rage
This was unexpected it’s been so long
A paper cut from an empty page.

Hear me plead hear me cry
Your pretty head is filled with lies
Your words so harsh, oh ever so harsh
Did I deserve it?

Rainy days speak to me
Crying tears that never came
Caged up in negative emotions, I want to be free
To fly away from this horrible pain.

Awaking from my dreary slumber
Was it really a dream?
You left your mark in my heart
It feels so hollow now.

Blinded by your anger you fight like a hungry cat
I’m the little terrified mouse that you cornered
Taunting me as I beg for you to hear me out
When will you see the truth behind those lies?

Hear me, but you gone deaf
See me, but you gone blind
You left your mark in my heart
It feels so hollow now.


I wrote this all under half an hour, never thought I will be that good at it :/ I'm not really a poem person at all XD

I know, you guys kinda pull through to me, staying at such a late hour my best friends weren't online. But you guys were :]

Thank you! I should do this more often then XD

That's so lovely! With practice you could write something that surprises you You should definitely write more often. I really love this poem and I hope it helped you release some of your bad feelings

Thank you, I will write more. I found something that I can express my anger and let off some steam and turn it into a beautiful thing.

That's really nice.It's honest and very emotional.

that was beautiful

Claudia wrote:

Hear me, but you gone death
See me, but you gone blind

Is it death or deaf?

I love it beautiful!

Little Phoenix wrote:

Claudia wrote:

Hear me, but you gone death
See me, but you gone blind

Is it death or deaf?

I love it beautiful!

ooh your correct! >-<
whoops XD

u r famous in poetry lol

This is amazing!!! I love it!! You have amazing talent!!!

cheekyu wrote:u r famous in poetry lol

me famous? Oh heavens no XD

someday I will be famous or at least left a mark in this world. I have a knack for all things creative.

This beautiful.. and emotional too. It actually made me have an idea of the pain the person might be in.. It's very effective at portraying emotion!! love it

well u might become famous on this site cause your poems rock

Aww I'm very flattered right now, I'm very gratefuul for this site. I wouldn't have attempt at poetry without you guys inspiring me ^_^

aww its ok luvie

wow, it's awesome!

Thanks XD

amazing

awwh XD you've marked my heart <3