Inspire the Dreamer
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Table of Love :: Moonchildren :: Poems
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Inspire the Dreamer
Shall
we fade away
belief of life in better days
You stick a knife straight through
love hurts so true
still in love with you
We fall from the stars
no hopes dreams can find
we learn and we love
no time too change no
once were gone
Now we share blue sun
burned cold open alone
it's true we fail too soon
regret becomes true
too the arms you choose
Nothing new I survive
my hopes dreams cant hide
reprieve and deny
our song no one hears
well now we're done
No tears eyes wired dry
lost dreams fall broken
cracked skies
Back too a place you choose
maybe this time you'll
lose
We fall from the stars
no hopes dreams can find
we learn and we love
no time too change no
once were gone
Or THIS VERSION
shall we say no more
tears fall too the floor
stick a knife straight through
stars mistreat you
must be love this proves
We fall from the stars
no hopes dreams can find
we learn and we love
no time too change no
once were gone
Now we know the score?
Tears dried clearing the floor
it's you I lost too soon
choice made go soon
with our life full bloom
We fall from the stars
no hopes dreams can find
we learn and we love
no time too change no
once were gone
lately ive been pinned down
open hollowed blue crown
through the pain I prove
the one I love is you
We fall from the stars
no hopes dreams can find
we learn and we love
no time too change no
once were gone
Inspired by sigur Ros
Which poem do you like best
P.O.D
2013
belief of life in better days
You stick a knife straight through
love hurts so true
still in love with you
We fall from the stars
no hopes dreams can find
we learn and we love
no time too change no
once were gone
Now we share blue sun
burned cold open alone
it's true we fail too soon
regret becomes true
too the arms you choose
Nothing new I survive
my hopes dreams cant hide
reprieve and deny
our song no one hears
well now we're done
No tears eyes wired dry
lost dreams fall broken
cracked skies
Back too a place you choose
maybe this time you'll
lose
We fall from the stars
no hopes dreams can find
we learn and we love
no time too change no
once were gone
Or THIS VERSION
shall we say no more
tears fall too the floor
stick a knife straight through
stars mistreat you
must be love this proves
We fall from the stars
no hopes dreams can find
we learn and we love
no time too change no
once were gone
Now we know the score?
Tears dried clearing the floor
it's you I lost too soon
choice made go soon
with our life full bloom
We fall from the stars
no hopes dreams can find
we learn and we love
no time too change no
once were gone
lately ive been pinned down
open hollowed blue crown
through the pain I prove
the one I love is you
We fall from the stars
no hopes dreams can find
we learn and we love
no time too change no
once were gone
Inspired by sigur Ros
Which poem do you like best
P.O.D
2013
kailen- Posts : 129
Join date : 2010-07-02
Age : 44
Location : Uk Somerset
Re: Inspire the Dreamer
Both poems are very interesting and I like them both. I like how you repeated "we fall from the stars" in both. I like the way the 2nd poem is rhymed though (more/score and the repetition of stars). Both poems have great imagery though Sorry if that came off sounding really technical, haha.
stargirlstrike- Posts : 1329
Join date : 2012-04-02
Age : 32
Location : US
Re: Inspire the Dreamer
stargirlstrike wrote:Both poems are very interesting and I like them both. I like how you repeated "we fall from the stars" in both. I like the way the 2nd poem is rhymed though (more/score and the repetition of stars). Both poems have great imagery though Sorry if that came off sounding really technical, haha.
Thanks I was listening too Fljótavík by sigur ros and wished I could sing too it
So I tried too transpose too English bit of technical fun lol
I love that band I found the chorus really goes well thanks for the feed back
Try looking at the poems alongside the music let us know what y'all thing
NOW GO DO
Lol
kailen- Posts : 129
Join date : 2010-07-02
Age : 44
Location : Uk Somerset
Re: Inspire the Dreamer
________Shall we fade away
Dreams of life in better days
You stick a knife straight through
love hurts so true____________
__________still in love with you
We fall from the stars
no hopes dreams can find
we learn and we love
no time too change no
once were gone
Now we share blue___ sun
burned cold _______open_ alone
it's true we fail too soon
regrets________becomes true
too the arms you choose
We fall from the stars
no hopes dreams can find
we learn and we love
no time too change no
once were gone
Nothing new___ I __survived
my hopes _____dreams denied
reprieve________deny the truth
The light only shined on you
Now no-one hears our song
well now___ we're almost done
No tears eyes ________wired dry
open hope falls by my side
You stick a knife straight through
love hurts so true____________
__________still in love with you
Cracked skies broken _______crown
Returned in hand ____open ___alone
Back too the place you _____choose
maybe this time ________you'll lose
We fall from the stars
no hopes dreams can find
we learn and we love
no time too change no
once were gone
P.O.D
2013
Sigur ros Rocks
Dreams of life in better days
You stick a knife straight through
love hurts so true____________
__________still in love with you
We fall from the stars
no hopes dreams can find
we learn and we love
no time too change no
once were gone
Now we share blue___ sun
burned cold _______open_ alone
it's true we fail too soon
regrets________becomes true
too the arms you choose
We fall from the stars
no hopes dreams can find
we learn and we love
no time too change no
once were gone
Nothing new___ I __survived
my hopes _____dreams denied
reprieve________deny the truth
The light only shined on you
Now no-one hears our song
well now___ we're almost done
No tears eyes ________wired dry
open hope falls by my side
You stick a knife straight through
love hurts so true____________
__________still in love with you
Cracked skies broken _______crown
Returned in hand ____open ___alone
Back too the place you _____choose
maybe this time ________you'll lose
We fall from the stars
no hopes dreams can find
we learn and we love
no time too change no
once were gone
P.O.D
2013
Sigur ros Rocks
kailen- Posts : 129
Join date : 2010-07-02
Age : 44
Location : Uk Somerset
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