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The Old-Fashioned Sweet Shop

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Post by MoonChildEve Sat Mar 26, 2011 8:36 am

So I decided to write a nicer poem!

There is a place, a magical place
Where cotton candy makes a cloud
The gobstoppers tastes oh so different
Where people are free to be loud

There is a place, a magical place
Where the doors are made from candy canes
The floor is made from sour sweets
And chocolate adorns the window panes

There is a place, a magical place
Where the tables are made from toffee
The counter is made from nougat
And the chairs taste like banoffee

There is a place, a magical place
Where the jars are full of walnut whips
Chupa Chups are given away free
The taste of jelly beans you lick off your lips

There is a place, a magical place
Where the bubblegum goes POP
Because, of course, this is by far the best
Old-Fashioned Sweet Shop!

I hope you like it! I love sweets and have recently become addicted to chewing gum and bubblegum. In fact, my love of sweet things inspired this poem x
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Post by MoonChildEve Sun Mar 27, 2011 1:17 am

So I'm now making a poem book for Kerli x I'm sending it with my letter and I'm adding this song x
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Post by Natt Sun Mar 27, 2011 9:25 am

Your poem very good affect on thr imagination. Epithets create magic and fairy-tale atmosphere. Very good work. Yes, I think that she will be very happy when she will read your art.

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Post by MoonChildEve Sun Mar 27, 2011 9:45 am

Thank you x
The book is all about imaginative things, after all!
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Post by Natt Sun Mar 27, 2011 9:51 am

You're welcome.
I hope that you will show your poems
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Post by MoonChildEve Sun Mar 27, 2011 10:30 am

I'm currently making the book. It's gonna be super sweet!
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Post by Natt Sun Mar 27, 2011 10:33 am

awww it sound so fantastic
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Post by Krissy Sun Mar 27, 2011 12:49 pm

very cuite

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Post by serenitypixie Fri Apr 01, 2011 10:24 pm

AWWH love this!! <3
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