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Post by MoonChildEve Fri Mar 04, 2011 8:53 am

Just a random, non rhyming poem made because I was bored x
It's called Little Girl x

Little girl, with your big sad eyes
Eyes black with despair
Are you lost, little girl?
Your mind is empty
Where are your memories, little girl?
You cry tears of blood
You're not human, little girl
An alien species, big black eyes
I sense your fear, little girl
No need to be afraid
The human race is your friend, little girl
Be afraid no more
Join with us, little girl
You have no memories
Little girl, little girl
Get off the cold hard ground
Little girl, little girl
No need to be afraid of who you are

Finished x
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Post by tonenorway Sat Mar 05, 2011 8:19 am

That was so cool, I really liked it Very Happy
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Post by MoonChildEve Sat Mar 05, 2011 8:36 am

Thanks x
It was made out of pure boredom. I like to try new things x
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Post by serenitypixie Mon Mar 07, 2011 10:31 am

I liked it too drunken xxx
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Post by Natt Sat Mar 26, 2011 2:54 am

Rhyming isn't important
Very good poem, I feel like this girl in your poem. I see in my mind every element of your poem.
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