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To be a vampire.
by Enigma.Flower Sat Dec 25, 2010 1:02 pm
Um, this is an old one ^^
But i had this trouble i used to write my poems on Bulgarian and i'd except any critique from you guys on my English
vocabulary or grammar. I need it
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To be a vampire in the night
With no food you‘re loosing sight
And your nature is longin‘ about
A place covered by a bloody cloud
To be a vampire under a pouring rain
With eyes caring hidden fire and shame
But the fire has burn out
Showered by a sinner‘s shout
To be a vampire with a soul inlove
A soul flying like an angel above
And to realise your love is doomed
Because it’s the only bloody moon
But i had this trouble i used to write my poems on Bulgarian and i'd except any critique from you guys on my English
vocabulary or grammar. I need it
----------------------------------------------
To be a vampire in the night
With no food you‘re loosing sight
And your nature is longin‘ about
A place covered by a bloody cloud
To be a vampire under a pouring rain
With eyes caring hidden fire and shame
But the fire has burn out
Showered by a sinner‘s shout
To be a vampire with a soul inlove
A soul flying like an angel above
And to realise your love is doomed
Because it’s the only bloody moon
Enigma.Flower- Posts : 11
Join date : 2010-12-25
Age : 29
Location : Bulgaria
Re: To be a vampire.
by Natt Tue Jan 11, 2011 1:54 pm
very good you showed how look life vampire. I like your poem
Natt- Posts : 5467
Join date : 2010-06-13
Age : 34
Location : Poland -
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