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ILU (First Haiku)

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Post by TheLastSongbird Tue Nov 16, 2010 8:33 am

I decided to write a Haiku to put on my page in the book. I thought I'd put it up here. It's the first Haiku I've ever written, so I'd love to know what you guys think of it Smile

ILU

In growth, the lotus
Liblikas...pale wings unfurled
Understand - you'll fly.

If I'm correct, "liblikas" is Estonian for "butterfly".
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Post by Sunnech Tue Nov 16, 2010 8:53 am

What is a HAIKU? Question

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Post by TheLastSongbird Tue Nov 16, 2010 9:44 am

It's a style of poetry that comes from Japan. Haikus usually have three lines. The first line has 5 syllables (or beats) the second line has 7, and the third line has 5 again.
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Post by Sunnech Tue Nov 16, 2010 9:55 am

ohhh wow that awesome... wow today I learn something new... yeah... cheers

Thank You do much... Very Happy

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Post by Krissy Wed Nov 17, 2010 7:21 pm

Sounds very pretty!..am sure kerli would like it.

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Post by pixiedust19 Wed Nov 17, 2010 7:57 pm

:DD thats like the best haiku EVER! xD

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Post by out of the hollow Wed Nov 17, 2010 8:11 pm

Very nice Very Happy And very Kerli!
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Post by Natt Sat Nov 20, 2010 7:34 am

so beautiful
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Post by TheLastSongbird Sat Nov 20, 2010 2:31 pm

Thankyou, I'm glad you all like it Smile
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Post by mimi Sat Nov 20, 2010 2:37 pm

yeah liblikas is butterfly Smile
and i like it. hmm.. thinking of writing it down and putting it up on my cork board Smile
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Post by TheLastSongbird Sat Nov 20, 2010 2:49 pm

Thanks Mimi, it means a lot that you like it that much.
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Post by mimi Sat Nov 20, 2010 2:50 pm

ps i know its not the place to put this but i sent you a PM and i think you haven't noticed lol Very Happy
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Post by TheLastSongbird Sat Nov 20, 2010 2:58 pm

Oh yeah, lol, I've replied Smile
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Post by Guest Thu Dec 02, 2010 7:24 am

beautiful I love you

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